alrite man but...
Yo man, cool track, but I was disapointed coz of the amount of distortion there was! What programs u use? Have you tried using compression b4? man you could go heaps further wit this track if you put a lil more effort in. otha than that yeah its cool. send me a private msg sum time and we'll chat. I luv this dnb stuff. yo check out my sinister demon song.
Peace out from LONE STARR
this was actually a boredom project that sounded pretty good in the end :P no original intention to be submitted
As for the distortion, trust me you wouldn't like the drumline at all if I didn't use my Lo-Fi FX on them. (They're Like "Grunge 3"'s drums with the lo-fi though, I <3 Grunge 3 :P)
Holy Crap! : )
Yo, It's LONE STARR! Wat up?
Man, when I first heard this song from start to finish, I was like, HOLY CRAP!! This is MAD AS! What the hell is it doin on 2.50? So I voted 5 for it to get the score up as much as my vote counts.
Firstly, wow, this has been mixed extremely well! Sounds like you've used a multiband compressor on the Master FX . They're new to me, I'm still workin' them out. Well Done!!
Secondly, that synth lead with the filter cut on it, (What is it? A TB 303?) that really got the hype going! I'm really diggin' that!
Another thing; Every now and then I'm hearing a vocoded sound, a robot or whatever. That's really cool! But I would like to have heard it say something a little more often, or maybe even do like a short verse or something! that would be sick!
Finally, there aren't any bad points to mention really. Dude, I would so be pumpin' this up at a rave party! Probly do like a seamless mix into antoher one of your tracks aswell.
I noticed u don't have an email address on your profile. I'm lookin 4 another FL Studio guru to jam with. If u want to you could email me jrpaine@optusnet.com.au and if you want like trade ideas and FL projects maybe?
PEACE OUT from LONE STARR
Wow, thanks for the long review. No, it wasn't a multiband compressor... it was jus the normal compressor =) that little thing sure is powerful =D
I might e-mail you later, though.
Thanks again!
Pretty Good
Hey. This is a cool track, I can tell u used FL Studio to make this. That Total Brokeness preset is mad as hey?
I've been using FL for a few years now. But I wasn't making tracks as good as urs when I was 14! Looks like you have a talent!
The whole track in general is well written, and your usage of effects is well coordinated. However, that drumloop, I've heard that around the place heaps (no offence) but it blends well with what you've made. Also (I hate to be negative)it sounds as if the song is gonna lead up to somthin big, but never gets around to it. I reckon it would be cool if after a while u had like a 1/4 bar pause, then a big BOOM! and then have a really deep, rumbling bass melody, made from a 3xOsc. Also have a harder drum melody, possibly with a Blood Overdrive FX put on it.
Overall 5/5 for my vote and 9 in the review.
You're doin well!
If you wanna talk or exchange FL studio Ideas/questions please email me.
P.S. Check out my drum'n'Bass! (Brute Force)
PEACE OUT from LONE STARR
Thanks for the ideas, I greatly appreciate it so much. Ill be sure to make the bass alot deeper and the beat alot harder. Thanks for the great comment!
10/10 Fuckin' Hilarious!
God, this is fuckin' hilarious! I listend to it like 20 times over an I'm still laughing!
Ur nintendo turned to a gameboy?
U swerved to avoid her crossing the street and ran out of gas?!
She's a stunt matress?!!
Man, that's classic! :) And mad as hits from Dope Dave and Tony. I like those characters!
Peace Out, LONE STARR.
hahah hey dude whats doing, im glad ya liked it, your my toughest critic too!!! but yer thats cool, oi i checked out your stuff and woah dude what a head spin (so many differnt variations) i wanna c u at the top so ima keep voting for ya. kingj... out
Fully Sick!
Yo jamie man, its ya homeboy LONE STARR! What's up? Yo this is great! Typical King J and Puff 'n' Fresh; I love it! It was mad as to hear andrew in the rap. I'd like to hear some more from him though. Andrew's probably already told you what I think but Everstop is THE most awesome shit I've ever heard you guys put out. I'd really like to do some mixing on it, do the mastering for it and colaberate wit yaz.
Anyway, catch yaz later! LONE STARR.
P.S. Keep up the AWESOME work!
yo dude, thanx i no hey, i like listened to how u made alex voices and damn thats kicked ass!! no crackle or nuffin, yer everstop i reckon was our best, and its a fuckin nightmare to get andrew to rap, also i heard your making and album, sweet as cant wait to hear it, also we got a group going jus me, u and aj ask andrew for more details, aight thanks man ill review your songs as soon as i can, catch ya and thanx for tha support
Very Cool!
Wow man, this is great! It's obvious that you've had a lot of experience writting music. I make a lot of my own music too. I love drum n bass. I submitted a drumnbass track recently, called "Brute Force." Do you think you could check it out and give me some feedback?
Peace out, Lone_Starr
This is wicked!
Hey Puff 'n' Fresh man! This is a sick beat. I love the creepy sounding bass and the harsh guitar riffs. Overall, I give it a 9 out of 10. the only thing letting it down is the fact that it needs COMPRESSION applied to stop the clipping and "pumping" rythm. But great work mate!
Peace out from Lone Starr.
Hey thanks lone starr. will do
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