Green-Phoenix's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Exocardiac Madness]

Pretty Good

Hey. This is a cool track, I can tell u used FL Studio to make this. That Total Brokeness preset is mad as hey?

I've been using FL for a few years now. But I wasn't making tracks as good as urs when I was 14! Looks like you have a talent!

The whole track in general is well written, and your usage of effects is well coordinated. However, that drumloop, I've heard that around the place heaps (no offence) but it blends well with what you've made. Also (I hate to be negative)it sounds as if the song is gonna lead up to somthin big, but never gets around to it. I reckon it would be cool if after a while u had like a 1/4 bar pause, then a big BOOM! and then have a really deep, rumbling bass melody, made from a 3xOsc. Also have a harder drum melody, possibly with a Blood Overdrive FX put on it.

Overall 5/5 for my vote and 9 in the review.
You're doin well!

If you wanna talk or exchange FL studio Ideas/questions please email me.

P.S. Check out my drum'n'Bass! (Brute Force)
PEACE OUT from LONE STARR

DJKorrupt responds:

Thanks for the ideas, I greatly appreciate it so much. Ill be sure to make the bass alot deeper and the beat alot harder. Thanks for the great comment!

[YO MOMA SO FAT!]

10/10 Fuckin' Hilarious!

God, this is fuckin' hilarious! I listend to it like 20 times over an I'm still laughing!

Ur nintendo turned to a gameboy?

U swerved to avoid her crossing the street and ran out of gas?!

She's a stunt matress?!!

Man, that's classic! :) And mad as hits from Dope Dave and Tony. I like those characters!

Peace Out, LONE STARR.

kingj4life3 responds:

hahah hey dude whats doing, im glad ya liked it, your my toughest critic too!!! but yer thats cool, oi i checked out your stuff and woah dude what a head spin (so many differnt variations) i wanna c u at the top so ima keep voting for ya. kingj... out

[piMp hAnD]

Fully Sick!

Yo jamie man, its ya homeboy LONE STARR! What's up? Yo this is great! Typical King J and Puff 'n' Fresh; I love it! It was mad as to hear andrew in the rap. I'd like to hear some more from him though. Andrew's probably already told you what I think but Everstop is THE most awesome shit I've ever heard you guys put out. I'd really like to do some mixing on it, do the mastering for it and colaberate wit yaz.

Anyway, catch yaz later! LONE STARR.

P.S. Keep up the AWESOME work!

kingj4life3 responds:

yo dude, thanx i no hey, i like listened to how u made alex voices and damn thats kicked ass!! no crackle or nuffin, yer everstop i reckon was our best, and its a fuckin nightmare to get andrew to rap, also i heard your making and album, sweet as cant wait to hear it, also we got a group going jus me, u and aj ask andrew for more details, aight thanks man ill review your songs as soon as i can, catch ya and thanx for tha support

[Sickel In Your Back]

This is wicked!

Hey Puff 'n' Fresh man! This is a sick beat. I love the creepy sounding bass and the harsh guitar riffs. Overall, I give it a 9 out of 10. the only thing letting it down is the fact that it needs COMPRESSION applied to stop the clipping and "pumping" rythm. But great work mate!

Peace out from Lone Starr.

digital-musician responds:

Hey thanks lone starr. will do